i decided to post my trailer on twitter and facebook to get some feedback to find out on what people like, dislike and ways to improve it.
I got some useful feedback from Twitter and this what evidence of this:
- Heather thought the music could be used all the way through the trailer but the costume and makeup of the girl looks very effective.
- Abigail thought the trailer was professional and interesting to watch
- Elisha thought the trailer is good and realistic
- Laura thought the trailer was good however my friends need to be more believable.
- haley thought the trailer was good and very well documented and produced however my characters need to be more realistic.
I got some more feedback and she said that the narrative isn't fully clear, therefore I need to provide some backstory as in who is the girl? and what is the myth? She also said that I should look at Candy man and bloody mary to link my trailer and storyline to a professional one and do some more additional research. She also thought the acting was weak at the start and not serious therefore I need to change the opening shots. She also thought I should bring the urban legend idea into my trailer to make the characters more fearful. I also need more fast paced action shots to provide sense of disequilibrium, And finally I need to enhance the soundtrack to make it look more scary and some heightened diegetic sound effects.





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